I'm feeling bitter about my mess. But I can't help it, I still love you to death.
This is my new one. I'm going to start looking into different recording/editing software so that I can record the ones I really like and make a stupid home made EP haha. I feel really dumb talking about this as if these are worth listening to by other people. I like them a lot, but that's because they're personal and mean something to me. I hope they can mean something to other people, but I don't know. I guess I just feel like an amateur that's in over his head. I've already decided that I'm going to title the "EP" About a Girl..., because every song that I like a lot is about the same girl. That sounds stupid too...but I like it. Oh, well. Here's my new one. I did it in one night/morning. Even though it was done in a short amount of time, it's one of the best that I've ever done.
Let me get on my knees
I could use a warm embrace
Let me sigh my sincere plea’s
You can kick the dirt back in my face
This sting doesn’t hurt so bad
Not with the drugs in my hand
They still can’t seem to fulfill my taste
Another hopefuls lungs laid to waste
Im left here in my favorite chair
Too bitter to change the record
I wouldn’t hate this song so much
If you’d at least try to play along
and say you still care,
But I’m left here
But I’m left here, I’m left here
I’m the only one
I’m tired of writing about you in every fucking song
But I’m left here, I’m left here
And I’m feeling bitter about my mess
But I can’t help it
I still love you to death
I’m too bitter to even say your name
but I’m left here and you’ve made it clear that I’m to blame
My name slipping out your mouth
As if you’re trying to get me for yourself
With your finger on the top of my head, give me a spin
I’ll wander away because after I heard I love you
it was I never want you back again.
But I’m left here, I’m left here
I’m the only one
I’m tired of writing about you in every fucking song
But I’m left here, I’m left here
And I’m feeling bitter about my mess
But I can’t help it
I still love you to death
It’s my choice, make me burn
it’s my choice, make me hurt
it’s my choice, make me learn
it’s my choice, please come back
I will say again that I like criticism a lot with these, so please comment.
6 comments:
This one is actually my favorite as well. "I’m left here, I’m left here And I’m feeling bitter about my mess But I can’t help it I still love you to death." Definitely some good lyrics. I want to be able to learn how to play the keyboard and learn how to use some editing software or something to help you out with your songs.
I always say I want to learn how to do something new and never do, but I'm set on helping you out with this in any way.
Hell yeah. I was looking at some software today and I think I'm going to download the trial for Adobe Audition, and then find a keygen. Hopefully that works well. Get started on the keyboard!
Ah, you are too damn good dude. I can't even come close to this when I try to write songs. I'm jealous haha. If I can be a part of this "EP" just let me know. So I can be like,"Oh, I was in this track, we're like best friends." when you get signed and stuff. Haha, but seriously, great song.
... I was serious about being a part of it though.
Ahhh you made me blush :$ (that's the blushing face) haha.
You can definitely be on it! I'll need lots 'o help.
Sweet, just let me know. Haha.
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