I know I posted like twelve hours ago, but I feel the need to put this up. I just wrote the last two verses and it's probably the most involved I've been in writing something. Hopefully this makes you feel something.
I keep you tucked away in the corner of my mind
Nothing’s gonna shake you out
You know I can’t shake you out
But we aren’t going anywhere from here
so try to forget about me and from now on
I’ll try to fake a few more tears
This is the only way I can say it won’t work
I miss you too, but not quite enough
Like the year before last, I’m not coming back
We had moving moments, but not quite enough
If you’re smart you’ll remember I only mad you mad
We were great together, but we’ll never be quite enough
It’s all supposed to hurt
Like a plane that can’t stop leaking gas
We were only going nowhere fast
I don’t know how to go about this
when I can only look forward to the past
Plans and hopes turned into lessons and memories
But if for one moment you think we can turn it back around
remember the only thing I’m good for
is running everything I love into the ground
This is the only way I can say I’m ruined
I miss you too, but not quite enough
Like the year before last, I’m not coming back
We had moving moments, but not quite enough
If you’re smart you’ll remember I only mad you mad
We were great together, but we’ll never be quite enough
It’s all supposed to hurt
Maybe it wasn’t anything but a bad addiction
We’re going to have to put it down to get back up
I just don’t see how we could ever made it
You know that I love you, but it still wasn’t quite enough
This is the only way I can say I’m sorry
Also, if there are any suggestions as to how to go about this musically, it would be appreciated. I'm not sure how I'm going to put music to it.
4 comments:
this reminds me of sophmore album rise against with a third studio album taking back sunday in there.
i think it would be a really great strictly acoustic piece [i'm not sure what you had planned with your other stuff but full band electric would really compliment most of the other stuff you've posted], it would probably make a really great three cord rock song with a heavy riff.
Thanks Natalee, I have music for it now. All that's left to do is memorize the lyrics haha.
lyrics say mad you mad shouldn't it read made you mad?
Obviously.
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